the winner by barbara kimenye

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She, thought the reader, was the greediest of all, but later we find out Pius won a lot less money than originally thought, Sarah stays with him and shows love not greed. Because it is a short story that the reader finds to be uneventful and can’t get to know the characters Pius or Sarah.

I don’t believe that any person, due to its boring content and slow pace, should ever be forced to read this story. They both seem to be flat characters, where you don’t get to know ether of them very well. The plot jumps from one emotion to another far to often due to this the message to this story is unclear and leaves the reader in the dark. If you can’t get to know the characters the story becomes boring.

This story should not be used in the English 11 curriculum.

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. Vocabularies like the foreign terms do not make vary much sense and ads for more reading.

The way this story goes is Pius wins a lot of money and people start to be very nice to him, like eating his food, and drinking his drinks, as well as trampling his garden.

The reader finds this story hard to follow due to the different type of English that the author uses. While one woman Sarah is acting as the lady of the house and not letting Pius even talk for himself.

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Barbara Kimenye, Pius Sarah, , jumps emotion, plot jumps emotion, english 11 curriculum, leaves reader, english 11, foreign terms, 11 curriculum, plot jumps, cant characters,

Approximate Word count = 339
Approximate Pages = 1 (250 words per page double spaced)

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