If there were ever a model for coming of age novels, Look Homeward, Angel by Thomas Wolfe, would be perfect. The story of Eugene Gant is unique and inspiring. The reader's attention is caught from the beginning and hooked until the end. In reading the abridged version, it is easy to follow the life of young Eugene, without a lot of nonsense or change of focus. The main focus is clearly the major happenings in Eugene's life, not the minor details. The abridged version provides enjoyment for those who would not pick up the novel due to its length. In reading the shortened copy, however, several questions are raised. Plot summary, choices of passages, and efficient development are all things to look at when abridging such a well-respected work. While there is still work to be done on this novel, it can be considered credible and coherent. Perhaps the ideas and themes that teach the reader good life lessons, are what make the novel the great work that it is.
             In order to make the abridged version of Look Homeward, Angel more coherent and credible, there is a need for plot summary. The plot summary provided between the first two sections were helpful, but could be a little more well developed. It is unclear how Eliza and W.O jump from speaking business to getting married. A few more sentences would create a more stable link between the passages and allow it to flow smoother. Between pages 29 and 39, the summary may want to include a little more about Eugene's early life. The one provided was very clear, but a little vague. It leaves the reader wondering if the horse stepping on Eugene's face is the only significant happening in his infant years. Another place where more explanation would be helpful is between pages 56 and 70. It was not mentioned why W.O. went to California. Though it may not be important, it would satisfy curiosity. The reason may also add to W.O.'s early character. There ...