;embroidered' has connotations of perfection, an infinite array of colours.
Throughout the poem Yeats concentrates on colours, especially different
shades of blues of the sky, representing the passage of time, seasons
changing but that throughout all the changes the sky still remains beautiful
In the first four lines of the poem Yeats creates a detailed image of
heaven and its perfection and beauty. Through this he states his wishes/ In
the following four lines he reveals what he would do with those wishes. He
lays his soul bare, and shows the depth of his love by declaring his undying
love for Maud Gonne. The only person who deserves such wealth as the
heavens, is Maud. If Yeats were God, and owned the heavens, the only one
worthy of receiving them would be Maud. He elaborates on this by saying
even the heavens would only be good enough for her to walk upon. By
stating this, Yeats is exalting his love: she is like a Goddess and he is
undeserving of her. He deems himself unworthy and humbles himself. In
"But I, being poor, have only my dreams."
Through this, Yeats suddenly becomes more realistic: he knows he is not God
and he knows he doesn't own the heavens. The only thing of value and
beauty he owns are his dreams. He has made himself vulnerable by
spreading all his dreams and desires before Maud, and now she must decide
if she will return his love and make his wildest dreams come true, or trample
and tear his cloths and shatter his dreams.
"Tread softly because you tread on my dreams."
He is waiting anxiously to see her reaction and is gently pleading that she will
not reject him. Through this last line he is begging her to be kind: she has his
heart and dreams in her hand; she has the power to decide his fate.
This poem is similar to Burns' and Wordsworth's poems in many
ways. All three sound like a song, a gentle c...