In the paper I wrote, the audience I had in mind would
             have probably been anyone who was in high school and had trouble
             in their classes. Other than the main audience, I intended for
             really anyone to read the paper. Well, other than to fulfill the
             assignment, I wrote this to inform people about me and my past. I
             wanted to know that I have changed from those times. I also
             wanted to inform people that there are people out there that will
             help you out in your life. Some of those people might be the
             people you have truely despised for the longest time. The person
             who helped me was the captain. I really did not like him too
             much from what he accused me of from the beginning of my freshman
             year. This is where I guess he knew he was wrong and wanted to
             My major problems in writing the paper was at first I
             could not decide on what to write about. I was thinking of using
             my journal, but I did not think I could elaborate about that
             subject enough. Another problem was trying to organize all the
             information I had so it would be effective. My other problems
             involved getting the paper to have an underlying meaning in it.
             I also had some trouble describing the events that happened. Not
             the main things, the small problems I was trying to express in
             the big ideas. Those were my major problems.
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