Persausive Essay

             A major concern in my community that should be changed is the condition of the sports
             fields. Almost all of my friends, teammates, and coaches agree with me that some action
             should be taken. These fields have been in bad condition long enough and it's time we
             First, the current fields we use now are a perfect place to get a serious injury.
             Athletes run on these fields, but don't notice the uneven ground, or the huge hole in front
             of them. And to make things worse, there is barely any grass, it is all dirt. I know from
             experience that those fields can cause dangerous injuries. You can twist your ankle, sprain
             your wrist, and throw out your back all in one game or practice. These fields are used by
             young children, just starting out in sports, as well as high school athletes hoping for
             scholarships, all of which could vanish in an instant.
             Another thing about the condition of the fields is that we need to higher, or find
             people willing to keep the fields in good condition. Serious athletes that play baseball want
             to have a baseball field where the dirt is soft, and not rock hard. They would also want
             grass beneath there knees. The serious athletes that play soccer don't want dirt all around
             them or holes that they can't see that come out of nowhere. If we could do fund raisers to
             help produce money, then we could pay people to help keep the fields looking good.
             Finally, if they fix up the fields, talented athletes can perform better than before and
             they could even be scouted for scholarships. This fact also applies with the idea of
             talented athletes loosing everything in one day because of an injury. In fact, there are many
             talented athletes in this community, but the bad field conditions are restricting their ability
             For these reasons, we should make an attempt to fix up the fields for sports teams
             to play on. Almost everybody would be happy, and it might m
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